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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Fimblewinter Ragnarok blows cold. Icebergs calve in southern seas. Frost giants laugh long. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Nan darling heart, oh how perfect this is darling heart, and IWIHWT, not that I ever could because I cannot do brevity, or if I do its never elegant. Wonderful darling girl utterly utterly wonderful Oh how well you compress your thoughts, I love it, exquisite writing absolutely exquisite As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
very well done!!! Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Nancy, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love the powerful views of nature you weave, this is splendid! (sigh) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
An interesting combination of words, Nan Somehow, they all seem to fit together so well that they make a very nice piece. ~ big hugsLyra |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
How well you transformed the majesty of haiku into this delightful piece of work! Brava! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Marsha, Hah! You can do brevity, you forget that I saw you prove it once. You just don't want to. 'fess up, girl. loner 23-thank you so much. Paul-that's so very kind of you. Noah-I count on your sweet remarks. Lyra- Elan-what a nice answer-in haiku form! Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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