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Open Poetry #21

Angel Eyes

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-11 05:27 PM

He looked into his first loves eyes
It was like he could see heaven
All he could think is she is such a blessing
Sent from God above
Then he says as he stares intently
"You have beautiful angel eyes."

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

1 posted 2002-07-11 05:29 PM

That's what I'd say while looking into your eyes Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2002-07-11 06:47 PM

the power of eyes in love - well captured here - thanks for your poetry - Paul

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

3 posted 2002-07-12 08:29 AM

Shouldn't an angel have inoscent eyes !?! ... only kidding, lovely poem, I think by your writing that may be it's not just your eyes that are angellic . Absolutly beautiful poem .
L.of.L. Tom .
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