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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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0 posted 2002-07-11 04:54 PM




If only you were here with me
here with me today
Instead of all those thousands
lonely miles away

Thoughts about us together
are always in my mind
Within my waking moments
and in my dreams at night

I would never get enough
to see your handsome face
To feel your arms around me
the strength of your embrace

But mijn lief I have to wait
still a little longer
While my love for you
only will grow stronger....






© Copyright 2002 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-07-11 04:56 PM



Mein Lief...
how lovely that sounds
among the English words...

you have a delicate pen, Neeraja...
and your write lace...

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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2 posted 2002-07-11 04:57 PM


an ode to the longing of love - thanks for a poem that weaves such loving images - Paul
jave
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since 2002-07-10
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CO, USA
3 posted 2002-07-11 05:04 PM


I like this. I know exactly how you feel

absence makes the heaart grow fonder

thanks for sharing

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-07-11 05:19 PM


A poem of love, a poem of longing.....written very beautifully and sensitively.
~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2002-07-11 05:23 PM


Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-07-11 05:27 PM


Well said...someone we share love with is someone worth waiting for...James
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7 posted 2002-07-11 07:06 PM


ENJOYED
Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-07-11 07:11 PM




(smiles) Oh Neeraja, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, keep on believing for your dreams are destined to come true as love can only grow if it is meant to be! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
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9 posted 2002-07-12 01:10 PM


You are all so sweet with your comments on my poem!!!  Thanks a lot!!!

Neeraja

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