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Passage of My Mind
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Passage of My Mind |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Passage of My Mind She was Chelsea and old lace grace of hand like dancer once, her music moved like variegated eyes until it was part of true that danced in meadow’s mind each time new. Curls dampened around her neck like a finger had twirled them with great care, placed with whispered love and just the right touch of neglect as if it mattered not, the effect. She dusted the passage of my mind with a smile that came from spirit place, then fastened her self to never forget and moved away but left a trace like reflected sun on branch of tree, I wonder what just happened to me. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh what a lovely moment, Martie... beautifully preserved by your pen.  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A vision of a parallel world? A kindred spirit? Not a haunting but a fanciful write. Enjoyed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Lovely and I've had those moments. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
  DAZZLING Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I wonder what just happened to me...My parents have always wondered what happened to me...My friends wonder what happened to me....Alot of doctors and scientists and brain malfunction folks wonder what happened to me.....but....as always....there's no "wondering" about this poem gal....nicely written.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie can see this as two of you ok you got a mirror out skin woman and heart woman cool stuff |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, what lovely enchanting thoughts! (kiss on cheek) May many more always fill your day, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lyra--Yes, a moment....sort of like a thought photo of another part of me. Richard--that's it! Thank you. So glad you enjoyed! Sy--I know you have. Virginia--What a wonderful word! Toe--I know what happened to you...you got a case of sense of humor. I'm glad too! DS--Two of me in one of me, probably more. I will keep looking. Noah--Thank you, sweet friend. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great poetry - such special images and evokes such thoughts - thanks for a great poem - Paul |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling Understanding Feeling... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Mixing a little RHYME these days in your works are we? You know I love it. Something about this piece just holds and innocense to it, sort of like when a child is deep in thought for a brief moment, then snaps out of it and moves on. Lovely verse as I have come to expect and you know cherish with full heart. Beautiful should cover it I hope. |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
Beautiful ...Your one of my favorite poetess. When I read your poetry ...I feel emotions that I haven't felt in along time. Enjoyed very much! Heather |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
emotionally invocative and mirroringly real when both halves of self are forced, finally, to face each other Talented writing, Martie! Yeppers! kudos from tSR |
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