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Elan
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since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

0 posted 2002-07-11 01:41 PM

A Note to a Love

It was ever effortless
           To turn my reflection to you

To mirror your eyes
            And shiver your skin

For you heard me last eve
            That sound that came to your heart

Do you remember how it
             Reverberated along your spine?

A passing thought,
             Come to stay in your heart

To nestle in,
              Make a home

To grow you young again
              Allowing your reach to cross miles

Trust me love,
              Even effortless requires endeavor

And I will always give that
              To you.

[This message has been edited by Elan (07-11-2002 06:09 PM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2002-07-11 01:46 PM

ms E..

this is a slender thread of silver
pressed between amber morning

way cool ms E

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-07-11 01:57 PM

Elan
What Dark Stranger said, well done enjoyed

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2002-07-11 02:32 PM

this is great poetry - thanks for a wonderful read - Paul

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-07-11 03:59 PM

Well noted...James

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-07-11 05:28 PM

Very beautifully written, Elan...

~ hugs to a great poet

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-07-11 05:29 PM

One word: Awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-07-11 05:34 PM

So beautiful, Elan!

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2002-07-11 06:40 PM

Élan darling girl how utterly utterly perfect is this, these words are silvered in starlight and arrayed in their best gown to bewitch and enchant. This is a note that rings from a crystal bell sweet and shimmering in the morning light.

You know I love this note, beautifully written simple exquisite and elegant writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

9 posted 2002-07-11 06:43 PM

Beautiful!

~tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-07-11 07:05 PM

ENJOY

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

11 posted 2002-07-11 07:26 PM

It all seems so simple yet so many miss it. You NAILED it square and said it wonderfully. Truely enjoyed and your format made it a pleasure to gaze at as well as to read.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2002-07-11 07:27 PM

...Exquisite!!...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2002-07-11 07:31 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is a wonderful love letter you have written here, I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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