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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-11 08:56 AM



Last Thoughts

Today I cried the last of my  tears,
even they have given up on me.

I long for my world to open up,
surprise me with its offerings.

I prayed last night for you Lyra,
for your health to return and your life to be long.

I wished for the happiness of all my friends,
to continue, and for each to never feel unloved
or alone.

I prayed selfishly, to end the pain I am in,
to heal the within, to right any wrongs.

I wished for the right words to express
all that is needed before I leave...
but none came this morning.

Today I cried the last of my tears,
upon this page...

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2002-07-11 08:59 AM


HUGS to you.....

Regards,
sudhir

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-07-11 09:00 AM


Maureen,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386
Ohio, USA
3 posted 2002-07-11 09:22 AM


very powerful feelings offered to all and deep emotions evoked - my hope is that in somehow answers are available for those that run out of tears - thanks - Paul
Marsha
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since 2000-07-10
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Maidstone Kent England
4 posted 2002-07-11 09:36 AM


Maureen darling heart your writing is always superb and this is no exception. The tears you have cried have fallen like diamonds on these blue pages and glittering have illumed then with your beauty. Never will you run out of hope for it follows you and here in this sanctuary you will find soul’s ease.

Always you shine darling girl and always your words stir the touch of love that lives still in us all. I love this utterly utterly it is beautiful and it’s presentation is perfect


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire

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