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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-07-11 07:10 AM


Spoken Soft and Tenderly

I was hurtin' for a long time
until she came my way
and said some magic words to me
that took my breath away.
Words that were soft and sincere.
Words of acceptance and healing
spoken loud and clear.
These words of which I had
waited so long to hear?
The words "I Love You"
now music to my ears.
I know not why it was so easy
for her to say these words
that meant so much to me.
That caught my attention.
That warmed my heart.
That set my spirit free.
These lovely words of love
from her sweet lips
spoken soft and
tenderly.

JamesLee
July11
2002


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Saunni
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1 posted 2002-07-11 08:20 AM


Tenderly written from a heart so deserving of that love. Great write.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
2 posted 2002-07-11 08:25 AM


softly and tenderly... indeed...

Regards to you, my friend,
Sudhir

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-07-11 08:42 AM


James,
It don't get much better than that, enjoyed.

Goodknight
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4 posted 2002-07-11 09:40 AM


very nicely written poetry - amazing how powerful a few words can be like I love you - this really gives wonderful insight to that power - thanks - Paul
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5 posted 2002-07-11 03:06 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I am kind of going through a bittersweet experience right now where I love my Joanna so much and I wonder if she feels the same for me still because I want to make her the happiest girl she can be! (sigh) I wish this joy to always flourish in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Toerag
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6 posted 2002-07-11 03:11 PM


Good poem Jamo...but stay away from those women....I've gotten gray hair since I first started foolin' with them females, (of course that was about 38 years ago?)
angeliceyes48198
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7 posted 2002-07-11 04:35 PM


Well written! Love can be a beautiful thing! This is an enjoyable read!
                      Angeliceyes48198

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