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My Heart Softly Calls
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My Heart Softly Calls |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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My heart softly calls out to yours but I don't know if yours can hear. Does it hold to much uncertainty Does it still hold yesterdays tears? Hear the words that it is speaking, feel it beating strong in my chest~ if your soul is tired and weary I will hold you while you rest. I will always walk beside you if you wish, then I will lead~ Forever I will be here for you share with me your every need. My heart softly calls out to yours listen to it without any fear~ the words it whispers are timeless~ I love you very much my dear. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-11-2002 06:23 AM).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Such sweet and gentle words So well written, A joy to read Gloom |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes...many a man is waiting to hear these words...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms donna am sure your heart speaks words that the moon wishes were hers to whisper to the sun enjoyed it |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Donna, your heart sounds are heard throughout the halls of Passion... very gentle, very you... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
thanks for the invitation to look into you heart and soul and for the wonderful images you weave for us - great poetry - Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna...as Karilea said... this is very gentle, very you! So beautiful...so soft... ~Hugs to you sweet poetess~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Lovely gentle words. Enjoyed much. Deb |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Donna darling girl this is exceptionally beautiful, your gift with words is a constant inspiration to a soul too long denied love’s light. Beautiful writing utterly utterly beautiful, I love it utterly. As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna Sweet and gentle love words...written like a sigh. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
You did it...ever so gently... mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely heartfelt write, Donna... Refreshingly beautiful.  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, your wonderful words always bring a smile to my face and make me sigh! (kiss on cheek) May true love always call to your heart and beat with destiny, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And I love you too....Ooops....I mean, great write....I guess this was written for someone else...right?...Oh well, we all have our little fantasies..... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now this had better get his attention or someone needs to call 911. Very beautifully and softly stated. Almost like a whispering of sweet "everythings". |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
Very beautiful.... Heather |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
gloom thank you . appreciate that. James, I guess there are. And when it is right perhaps they will. thank you. Dark, you always have that special way of touching me. Thanks for making my  smile. It was much needed...Karilea I am glad you hear. I guess sometimes love isn't only blind.....it's deaf too. thank you. Paul thank you for reading. Nancy, thank you. Maybe being so "me" isn't always the best thing to be.... Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-12-2002 06:28 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Deb, glad that you enjoyed. Marsha, thank you. I hope the lights shines soon for all of us who need love. Martie, sigh....I am glad you enjoyed. MC, I appreciate that, thanks. Lyra, thanks much hon. Noah, you are a breath of fresh air. Thank you. Toe, yes I guess we do have our own fantasies. Perhaps love is a fantasy? Thank you. Mark, perhaps someone should dial 911.... maybe it was just whispers of sweet nothings after all... Heather, thank you and welcome to passions. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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