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coquette of linger |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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good morning whisper of day let me wake you gently with a kiss and may I lay down beside you just for a few minutes and rub your back and shoulders I brought you some coffee with a hint of cream and some berries may I brush your lips with them and make you smile may I bathe you slowly today and wash your hair too and when I dry you after will you suggest a lotion that makes your skin sing alive later, shall we walk there by the sea will you wear your big hat of sun and let me hold your hand shall we pretend to be first love when we enfold our arms as each hour blesses us with warm may I kiss you proudly there on your mouth that I worship even if others are around may I blush you with a kiss will you go out with me tonight on a date for dinner at seven can we dress in our best then and order elegant flavors may I feed you whispers too and tomorrow may I wake you again ©Dark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
She would just have to be stupid to say NO Dark. Who could turn down such a wonderful invitation? This is a beautifuly romantic write, love to see this side of you. Morning hon. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
darkest stranger...you ARE romantic...helen |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If she says no.... she's a fool. An excellent way to wake this morning, but I'll take tea today! LOL... Good Morning, DS... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms donna...thanks babe....just a snapshot of daydreams, big hugs to you babe Good Morning ms slick helen, and you have a hat like that too...(grin) thanks for the read babe ms sunshine..now that figures, I brought you coffee, fresh ground and slow perked and hand skimmed cream and now you want tea... pssst I got a spankin for you also thanks babe, Good Morning |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmm, good morning Dark.. more berries...please? ~shy smile & a slow hug~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Love simplicity  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS. How's the cool? Such lovliness! Deserving of a sigh. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this poem would be next to the word romatic in the dictionary - wow - so powerfully romantic - your write this so well DS - thanks Paul |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E, slow hugz to you lady friend, thank you for the eyes sy, thanks sir you bless me ms martie, good morning, the cool is still here, but warming a bit, thanks you and hugs to you lil neighbor good knight paul, thanks sir, was trying to fit that image closely to a dream place |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DS darling boy this is one of your best, the lines of this delight are superb, truly awesome. Yet again you’ve spun words into magic and spread them in a carpet of light. How beautifully you’ve written of the waking sigh how delicately you’ve traced the day’s warmth with your amazing artistic eye. Do I love this? ……. You KNOW I do, never ever do you fail to lift a poem up to the heights of wondrous beauty. This is truly exquisite writing and I love it love it love it utterly.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mmmmm ms mushy can only hug you for your sweetness well maybe bring you a sip of coffee too thanks so much dear lady friend |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
could anything linger more refreshing than a dose of romantic Dark so early in the day.. I enjoy you this way.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina do you have a hat? and can you get around the curfew? thanks hon, oh and bring a blush too? |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
a drop of spoonfed dream elixir escapes the corner of her smile, searching out neck coves where, salted by her skin, it becomes an ocean for them to swim in. Could use a little dip in the ocean today... way hot here. *s* Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indigo bring your suitless smile and some hurry feet there must be a cool place among the forest of shimmering heat thanks lady for the reads |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may you forever share breakfast and happy smiles every morning with the one you love in the morning light! (sigh) This is lovely as always, sweet friend, we all love you so much, I LOVE IT!!!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friendly angel, thanks noah for your gift of praise |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Even romance is like no other in your hands, gawd, I love this, you're amazing you know that?! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
there would be no need of pretense of first love--you have described my perfect day...hugging myself here. mmmmmmmmmm...... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ LOVE the title .... *sighing* at the imagery~ Shivering with the romantic touch of it all~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Would you please get cloned...at least 1000 X's. I don't know how I missed this but I'm so glad that it surfaced. Enjoyed--even before my morning coffee... Shenachie |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks to you Honeybee for your eyes on this. Lauren you are always a treat when you read and reply. Serene Mrs. thanks to you for your wifely review (hehe) still want to kiss the bride. Marge, you are a sweet heart, I enjoy your comments so much. Bridget, you have to keep at least 999 of the clones if you copy me...or they might site you for littering (grin) thanks hon for the thoughts |
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