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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-10 09:28 PM



Could

could I
sit next
to you
uncover myself
bare my soul
without worry
or rejection
could you cover
my faults
could my words
touch you
could I draw
you near
could you dare
to reach me
could you listen
to my heart
a soul
that is
screaming
in whispers
of could

gtky



© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386
Ohio, USA
1 posted 2002-07-10 09:31 PM


what a powerful capturing of the needs of sharing and the risk thoughts that go with it - great poem - Paul
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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2 posted 2002-07-10 10:25 PM


:thumbup:

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-07-11 05:23 AM


Very nice...can do...James
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression
4 posted 2002-07-11 06:56 AM



I Always enjoy
The way
You say much
With few

right down the middle of the page

Gloom

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2002-07-11 06:59 AM


beautiful Helen.  If we could always have the answers wouldn't life be perfect?  Enjoyed.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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6 posted 2002-07-11 07:47 AM


could would should....

cool write ms slick
dug it

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2002-07-11 08:00 AM


Helen,
You'll get ever man on the site with this one
excellent.

turtlefreak1979
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since 2002-05-29
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~turtle lane~
8 posted 2002-07-11 03:16 PM


very very nice, loved it!!
vandana
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9 posted 2002-07-11 07:08 PM


ENJOY YOUR READ
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