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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-07-10 06:52 PM


My feelings for you run deeply
With the naked eye you cannot see
I love you higher than any mountain
For you mean the world to me

I feel your love move through me
And feel your warmth in the air
The clouds move in so quickly
On the days when you're not there

Your love is full of surprises
A treasure for me to behold
You're the colors in my rainbow
My very own pot of gold

You're my beacon in the night
That lights my way upon the shore
My love moves gently with the tide
As you keep me coming back for more

You're the one that I come home to
The one I want here by my side
Loving you I will always remember
For in my heart you will forever reside

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-10 06:54 PM


Love is a grand thing.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-07-10 08:46 PM


The clouds move in so quickly
On the days when you're not there


Exactly!

aries_luv_ppl
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3 posted 2002-07-10 08:53 PM


I like it!

Eliza Simmons
~He is amazing regardless how we feel.
~He is amazing because He cares us regardless our beliefs.

Goodknight
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4 posted 2002-07-10 09:13 PM


thanks for the wonderful deep feelings so beautifully written here - loved this poem - Paul
SmartChick
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5 posted 2002-07-10 09:22 PM


Beautiful Sue!
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6 posted 2002-07-10 10:13 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may your strong feelings of love forever be there and may your love always believe in you all the same, sweet friend, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-07-10 11:42 PM


A beautiful love poem, Sue...
You do these so very well
~ hugs from the heart

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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