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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Advance is this just a beautiful fantasy we feel or is it the dreams that could make everything so real of all the things I have lived to regret I want you to be one that I hold not to forget and all the obstacles that stand in the way of advance I pray will disappear before we lose and we miss this chance |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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turtlefreak1979 Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 20~turtle lane~ |
your words are wonderful, really makes me think!!  [This message has been edited by turtlefreak1979 (07-11-2002 03:19 PM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
powerful message for that special one! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
as usual a great poem from a great poetess - love the images you weave for us - loved the poem - Paul |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I have two words for ya sweet lady... Fate & Karma... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I'm glad to see that some things never change!! WONDERFUL!! Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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