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angeliceyes48198
Junior Member
since 2002-05-28
Posts 16
Michigan,USA

0 posted 2002-07-10 06:08 PM


My Gift To You

A love so true
only found in dreams
my gift to you
my soul redeems

A treasure so rare
heaven sent from above
I will treat you with care
giving you my undying love

Place my hand in yours
lead me by the heart
as my spirit soars
never to depart


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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-10 06:09 PM


This is a very good poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2002-07-10 06:48 PM


Beautiful words along with wonderful images.  This is the first I have read of your work and I will look forward to reading more.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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