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0 posted 2002-07-10 04:39 PM


Eternal Tears

Tears in the wind,
float 'cross the sea,
bringing to all,
a new misery,
falling as rain
as the waves.
Break Down.
On distant shores,
where grass is greener,
white roses grow.
O' Purity.
Moon lights the sky
Stars light her heart,
A vision of beauty
the whole world can see.

- With Everlasting Love to my Canadian Princess

"Pretend inferiority and encourage his arrogance."

Sun Tzu

© Copyright 2002 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-10 04:42 PM


That is what I call a beautiful piece of work.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-07-10 04:50 PM


That was lovely, Andrew. How are you doing, mate? *points at email address*

~Titus

As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together.

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Thank you for the replies

"Pretend inferiority and encourage his arrogance."

Sun Tzu

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4 posted 2002-07-10 06:01 PM


Very nice...James
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5 posted 2002-07-10 06:22 PM


.... thank-you for sharing this.
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6 posted 2002-07-10 06:22 PM


absolutely beautiful!
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7 posted 2002-07-11 06:04 AM


Thank you for spending the time replying to my work it is much appreciated.
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