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For Mikey & Lori |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
He told me that she was the eigth wonder an undiscovered beauty- until he with curious yet delicate hands wandered the soft dark & light of her existence He told me that her eyes inspired an emerald's sparkle and how he discovered the true ingredient of sugar upon her lips She gave him reality with rainbows & laughter in the face of pain... He said that he could never leave her for how can one live without breath? She is the tremble within his heart the power behind the beat "Do you know the sound of love?" he asked of my unsure brushing a shell free of sand he placed it in my hands & bade me listen I heard the ocean... it whispered, "Lori" ~Tier 7/02 "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (07-10-2002 01:54 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Oh my god!!!!! Thank you so so so so sosos osososososososos o so so so so so so sososos o so soooooooo much! Holy.......... Wow... Yr one in a million, Tier... Signed, Mr. Awestruck She said burn ... together. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
How gorgeous, Tier.... a very special tribute to an adorable couple of poets.  ~ big smily hugsLyra |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is perfect girlie!!! I can see the biggest smile EVER gracing Mikey's lips... yep, very purdy... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
 Oh wow!!!!! *deep breath* Wow... *severe blushing attack* Thank you... That was so beautiful! "Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"Do you know the sound of love?" he asked of my unsure brushing a shell free of sand he placed it in my hands & bade me listen I heard the ocean... it whispered, "Lori" =============================== yes this is very lovely.. you captured the way he adores her well... I have been touched many times by his cherish of her...and left in awe many times by the poetry this love inspires in him. a beautiful sharing of poetry Tiersdin.  jm Now for me some words come easy |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
powerful poetry and wonderful images - thanks Paul |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I ne'er thought I'd like being talked about in the third person so much. "Silly bunny, there are no monsters in here." - Chrys, from Gloom Cookie |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Now this is love!!! What a lovely way you’ve put his feeling into words Tier. Gorgeous. Mike and Lori, your love seems as though it was made on the stars…a little piece of heaven here on earth. So happy for you both. Puppy school 101...please teacher...make Duncan stop humping those poor girls legs!!!! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, Tracey. And thanks again, Tiersdin! Hopefully ah'll be online t'night, and we can write s'more. She said burn ... together. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
At the risk of repeating myself...ain't love grand? You wanna tell 'em about the mmmmmm sound or should I? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet firend, I can tell Mike and Lori love this so so much, this is sooooo thoughtful of you, you are a delight to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This IS gorgeous...and a wonderful testimony to a couple that is a testimony to love themselves. A beauty of a poem here. Love it. |
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