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Soleil Noir
Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-07-10 11:45 AM



Schema

Recognize and embrace
moments your feet call
this ground home…

Feel shifting walk
of thoughts
ride decisions floating…

In soft bend grace
curious comments
of those framed attitudes…

For the picture you adopt
within you
is not the one they see…


© Copyright 2002 Soleil Noir - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
1 posted 2002-07-10 01:40 PM


For the picture you adopt
within you
is not the one they see…

Soleil...I really love the truth of this...
I think its something we all do...
and you wrote it brilliantly.
~ hugs of hiding ourselves

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2002-07-10 02:43 PM


ms noir
are you doing magic again
slide of woman hand
conjur of suggestion?

enjoyed it lady

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056
Kansas USA
3 posted 2002-07-10 02:47 PM


Interesting, well-thought out write.  I've heard it said that when there are two people in a room, there are six persons present...the way they see themselves...the way they perceive each other... and the actual person that each one is.

Thanks for posting.

Shenachie

Krissy
Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556
kent England
4 posted 2002-07-10 06:56 PM


Soliel hi there Finally I get the chance to get on here and reply, it’s a nightmare, mum should be shot at dawn, but I don’t expect that I could get the court to convict her. I don’t think computercide is actually recognised as the crime it is.

This is a really wonderful  piece of writing, the flow is exquisite your writing really is exceptional, and this flows like a dream. Beautiful and so well written, and oh do I know this feeling

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
5 posted 2002-07-10 08:29 PM


Soleil

Deep and intriguing...the many sides of things....especially, lovely thought producing poetry!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-07-10 09:16 PM


Soleil...what Bridget said exactly.  
I could never have said it better.
Well done.
~Hugs~

Goodknight
Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386
Ohio, USA
7 posted 2002-07-10 09:19 PM


deep and thought provoking - thanks for the great poetry - paul
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