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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Balance Facts explode and dreams implode My days of wear my nights of dare. But together they are one load. A mixture of the real and rare One is weary dreary or bright Depending on the bite of day One a fantasy of the night A wish a wile, a tricks display. Most will separate the two Two categories of deed One an option what you do The other a wished for need I file away the fantasies Portfolio each day of work Portion out the ecstasies And limit life to simply irks. I dip my cup the dreamers well But only sip to keep the spell |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
your ream of dream within the scheme of rhyme in time suits well my mind I trip along the fantasy to wear me well your reverie... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elan, Delightful responce, thank you. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
But only sip to keep the spell ... Wise words indeed!!! Regards, sudhir |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I dip my cup the dreamers well But only sip to keep the spell Can I dip my cup there also sey? Enjoyable write. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, I enjoy a sip of wine. Thank you my friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit The well is open dear friend.  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy and writer of days wisdom, have you any idea how spectacular this poem is? No probably not since you entirely lack all conceit, then let me tell you darling heart it is awesome, and no I am not just saying that. Naturally the rhythm is perfect and the flow is utterly utterly spot on. Your writing is never less than perfect sometimes however even I am amazed at the beauty you mange to weave through your words. This is simply perfect and I love it. Whenever my soul needs guidance I simply dip into your deep pools of wisdom and my equanimity is restored. Wonderful writing as always your words sing to the soul Perfect writing darling heart absolutely perfect  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I file away the fantasies Portfolio each day of work Portion out the ecstasies And limit life to simply irks. I dip my cup the dreamers well But only sip to keep the spell ahhhhhhhh...me too, me too ~~sighing M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Facts explode and dreams implode My days of wear my nights of dare. But together they are one load. A mixture of the real and rare =============================== I file away the fantasies Portfolio each day of work Portion out the ecstasies And limit life to simply irks. I dip my cup the dreamers well But only sip to keep the spell ====================================== well what do ya know...I sip me tea the same way  *L*Facts explode and dreams implode and THAT is my too cool for school line of the day... your poetic balance is like a rhymed ballet...every motion...is pure poetry... and your wisdom keeps the rest of us on our toes. and ya know i am diggin those internal rhymes divine. Mind if I sip a sample? *winkiewinkie* Tinker-toes LOL  Now for me some words come easy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, You are too kind. Maureen, Thanks for the me too. JM, Drink to your hearts content. Randy Stinky |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I dip my cup the dreamers well But only sip to keep the spell Beer, wine or spirits, Sy? Sometimes, even coffee will keep the spell, if the conditions are right. ~ drink up those hugsLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, Your so cute and clever. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know...I know...I'm late for your morning *sigh* Sy.. ...but, I wasn't feeling well, and besides, this goes down just as well in the evening too! ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
 Enjoyed this very much.Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sy,(as I see everyone calls you) The very first line had my attention.... down to the very last.  to you Sir!~Sheri |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Seymour Hi there Finally I can get on here to reply to your wonderful poem, you have no idea how inconvenient are mum’s computer problems. How could she kill it like that I do not know. This is an excellent write from you I really enjoyed it, the lines flow incredibly smoothly and the content is as all of your are excellent. Your use of form and structure cannot be bettered. Really exquisite work As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress, Good evening and I hope you are feeling better. the_loner_23 Thank you very much. Irie, Thank you my friend. Krissy, Always nice to hear from you. |
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