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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-07-10 06:42 AM

I remember
gentle
whisper finger feather touch
I stroke
my face
remembering
the cradle of your palm
in span
from chin to brow
as your fingers
drifted
telling tales
in trace
and heartbeat
in the tips
of touch
pulsate
in a native drum
pounding
rhythm
kept in time
to shaking of my knees
your fingers
painting passion's peace
silk-on-silk
beneath my blouse
and oh the kneading
need of me
now
a shiver
up my spine

I shook it off
licking lips
eyes half open
eyes half shut
I am the lioness
in hunt
in urgency
I take your hand
leading
pleading
rocking need
of one still pond
in beg of stone...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-07-10 06:49 AM

Dang Karen, this is soft, sultry,
and downright awesome. Your pen
has yeilded a keeper this am...
wonderful!!

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-07-10 06:52 AM

A pleasure to read...silky...James

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-07-10 11:18 PM

and heartbeat
in the tips
of touch
pulsate
in a native drum
pounding
rhythm
kept in time
to shaking of my knees
your fingers
painting passion's peace
silk-on-silk
beneath my blouse
and oh the kneading
need of me
now
a shiver
up my spine
===========================
of one still pond
in beg of stone...
===========================

how did I miss this ???
actually...this one needs to be read at night ...
this is absolutely lovely KA..

*sigh*

I miss writing like this too..

Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much ...
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch.

J.Browne

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-07-10 11:18 PM

*sighs* Good poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-07-10 11:36 PM

Dang girlie...this is sensual!!
WOW!...Enjoyed MUCH!
~Hugs~

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

6 posted 2002-07-11 12:25 PM

Soft, sensual, and a little spicy...I like this a lot! Beautiful poetry.

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2002-07-11 01:23 AM

You're right Jams, this one needs to be read at night.

of one still pond
in beg of stone...

Not often I'd feel comfortable with that word...'beg'. But here, now, your poem, my life...perfect. It's a damn begable feeling, isn't it? lol

I’ll go to puppy class…but Tracey has to wear the muzzle.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2002-07-11 02:34 AM

May your night(s)find stones a plenty to send the ripples cascading to the shores of your heart and soul. A cowboy just shouldn't be allowed to read words such as this, especially when his stone is in currently in another state. Beautiful write filled with longing passion and a bit of spicey zest to keep the senses alive. Truely enjoyed it much, especially the last two lines.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

9 posted 2002-07-11 08:29 AM

you come up with the most amazing way of writing great poetry...

Thanks for the read, O serene one...

Regards,
sudhir

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

10 posted 2002-07-11 09:45 AM

very sensual poetry - evokes nice thoughts and emotions - thanks - Paul

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