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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-07-10 05:48 AM


You say it’s not too late for me to finally realize,
That nothing wrong with having some emotion,
But then you turn away when I look deep into your eyes
Can’t you see that causes me some confusion,
What is there you see that makes you want to quickly turn your head
Is it the sadness that’s become my nature,
You can’t know what comes from strolling on the plains of dead
When living through it just becomes a failure,
I’d tell you all about those times but you don’t want to know,
Because doesn’t blend with your reality,
So pack your things up again I guess it’s time for you to go,
Go running some where else to anyone but me,
You say that it’s a shame I have lost all of my feeling
But still you pack your bag and go away,
I guess you can’t see what to me your actions are revealing
That despite it all it just another day,
I guess you thought that I might cry and beg you not to leave
But I grown used to losing all I care for,
Having nothing left to me is no reason for me to grieve,
It’s happen too many times before,
So I sit with lights turned off inside a darkening room
It only so I won’t be wasting the electricity,
And now that you have left my home is just becomes my tomb
Of lost emotions and reality.

Gloom
Listening to Bob Dylan late at night



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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2002-07-10 05:54 AM


yeah, well...smile?

don't think twice.
it's alright.



and oh so many more...I play "bob" when the cool fronts come in...and the windows are open, and the sheer lace panels on my curtains can "blow in the wind"

hugs you.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2002-07-10 06:04 AM


yeppers, I do know it well, on both sides.
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2002-07-10 06:22 AM


but he also said..."you're gonna make me lonely when you go"
Professor Gloom
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4 posted 2002-07-10 09:43 AM



Thank you, Serenity,
Pleased you enjoyed,
The answer must me cooling off,
Which must be hard to do with lace.

Thank you, passing shadows,
Glad I could strike a memory cord for you.

Thank you, 1slick_lady,
He said lots of things, glad you liked my take of it.

Gloom


Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2002-07-10 11:31 AM


But everybody must get stoned.

Nan

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