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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-07-10 05:43 AM


I fly moth wing mouthed on sigh high skies
when you music me the euphony of yes words
when we are kinship skin, candy unwraped in crave
as luxieria benighted in un-illumination

we are soot colors of pleasure muffle meld
I speak bark songs, I am bulldog doured of hunger
and glower our love weave with sin side tender
when you agitate in your skin with excited ends

I worship the didder of your tremble bendings
my puffing gasps are brown sacks of laughter
you run with them tiptoed in your fingers
and lick their flavor as joke jelly melting

you are flannel face silly with blush girl grin
when you rub your grease on my shirt canvas
and stain my mind with lubricated euphoria
we are enjoy words in boxes filled contented deep

I am binged with glut dreams of satiation
and my 'want to' places are folded towels in sun
I breathe the scent of memory smells in them
and pray for rain to drench our willing again

you are moth wing mouth smiles flying then

©Dark
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-10-2002 05:44 AM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-07-10 06:05 AM


I speak bark songs--
elder Oaks sing song in braille--
fingertips read history
as edges of present prevail.

I cleave unto a life with root--
I speak bark songs--and sing them smooth.


lovely little daydream you gave me there--um, how much do I owe ya?

truly lovely ds...tsk..tskk..t'me..

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2002-07-10 06:06 AM


mmmm lazy good morning to you Dark.
If smiles could fly, mine would be there already.  way cool write this am, now if the rest of my body will just wake up...*wink*

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


passing shadows
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3 posted 2002-07-10 06:08 AM


I had to read this two times, and I'll do it again, maybe more than once again...but this is intense...awesome...a writing that could only come from you. I'm impressed....very!
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2002-07-10 07:35 AM


serene one..
paid in full ms..the tsk tsk 's did it, thanks for your crazy smile

Donna thanks babe, you will have a great day today...just saw some mist whisper people....they said she will smile with deep heart.

passing shadows, you bless me with your comments and I do appreciate your reads

rwood
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5 posted 2002-07-10 07:37 AM


I am binged with glut dreams of satiation
and my 'want to' places are folded towels in sun
I breathe the scent of memory smells in them
and pray for rain to drench our willing again



You are magnificent thoughts...I am simply ready to do laundry..outside, wild and..well you know..

Sincerely,
Reg

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2002-07-10 07:41 AM


Regina..

no  no no..not the nekid laundry lady thing..well ok, let be bring my gym socks and doggy blankets

thanks babe for the hug by touch

Elan
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State of Wide Eye
7 posted 2002-07-10 08:41 AM



brown sacks of laughter
flannel face silly

these two excerpts will have me smiling
all this day, and into the eve of thought...

as for the rest?
eye smiles over all....

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-07-10 09:06 AM


Dark Stranger,
You brew an exotic elixir
In a secret mixer, enjoyed.

Martie
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9 posted 2002-07-10 10:10 AM


Good morning, DS

You are write word enthusiasm!  Thanks for such good reading.  Cool huh?

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2002-07-10 11:05 AM


elan...thanks ms E, always a treat
to have your smiles

Sy, thanks guy, much appreciation for the comments

Ms martie, good morning and thanks to you...yes it is shivering 70 here this am (big grin) supposed to warm up later

Indigo
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11 posted 2002-07-10 01:13 PM


fueled by her mouth sighs
burrowed deep in surfeit's sleep
he found he could fly


Indigo

Janet Marie
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12 posted 2002-07-10 01:23 PM


I fly moth wing mouthed on sigh high skies
when you music me the euphony of yes words
when we are kinship skin, candy unwraped in crave
as luxieria benighted in un-illumination

=============================
and glower our love weave with sin side tender
when you agitate in your skin with excited ends
==============================

when you rub your grease on my shirt canvas
and stain my mind with lubricated euphoria
we are enjoy words in boxes filled contented deep
===========================
I breathe the scent of memory smells in them
and pray for rain to drench our willing again

you are moth wing mouth smiles flying then
=============================


my oh my....my my my....
ya had me from the first line...
me thinks this puts a whole new light on being a moth
Not even a bug zapper could deny the pretty blue flames heat in this one.
very very very cool write DS.

signed....
mothwithsigheyes   lol

and lol @ the replies on this...
Reggie? is that laundry done yet

Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much ...
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch.

J.Browne

Kellie_Cantrell
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13 posted 2002-07-10 01:54 PM


This is a great poem. I don't like it from my personal belief, but it is an awesome poem anyways.
Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2002-07-10 02:40 PM


MS Indigo,
sleepy eye sighs
are the sky
for the wings of dreams

thanks lady friend
for the review and comments


janet marie, (large grin) was wondering if the moth in wing would be a good meta' for a smile...seemed it would for you anyway (wink) Thanks for the read ms..a pleasure to have your visits.


Kellie, there is not much more of a treasure to be had,  than to have someone appreciate something that is not to their liking...thanks ms for your read and reply.

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15 posted 2002-07-10 10:19 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I loe these flittering fanciful thoughts you create, sweet friend, you truly are a butterfly of these pages who shines with kaleidoscope inspiration! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dark Stranger
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16 posted 2002-07-11 07:48 AM


noah, thanks my friend for the review
Goodknight
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17 posted 2002-07-11 05:01 PM


DS - what a wonderful poem to ponder - to experience - to read again and again - your word magic is awesome - thanks Paul
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
18 posted 2002-07-11 07:21 PM


we are soot colors of pleasure muffle meld
I speak bark songs, I am bulldog doured of hunger
and glower our love weave with sin side tender
when you agitate in your skin with excited ends
=====================

I am binged with glut dreams of satiation
and my 'want to' places are folded towels in sun
I breathe the scent of memory smells in them
and pray for rain to drench our willing again
=====================

Though the entire piece is meld mind magnifique, the above two verse lend thought to a creation classic in it's nest of learning.  Truely an superb penning from you and an excellent reason for me to explore more of your works.  Saving this one in my library to savour and to gain some knowledge that I seek.  

Dark Stranger
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19 posted 2002-07-12 06:21 AM


goodknight sir, thanks my friend, so much appreciation to you


Mark, humble thanks artful friend, am pleased from your review and that you found useful toolage for thought.

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