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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-07-09 04:20 PM


cries of a blind man
left unheard
glories of god, holding my hand
bless me before thee
take me by the hand
lift my soul to heavens breath
the day they pronounc eme dea
fluttering and sputtering
i try.. to fly
come again dear lord
don't leave me here
I won't escape
take me from the devils grasp
take away his flames.. oh lord
most i say, most i believe
is simple wishful thinking
lord let me see thee
at the pearly gates of heaven
let me in dear lord
tell me all your secrets

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-09 04:21 PM


Great poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Larry C
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Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
2 posted 2002-07-09 09:46 PM


Kellie,
Yup...the loner is right! Good write again. Love ya', Larry C

Show you care to those you love...today.

Daniel van Vliet
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since 2001-08-31
Posts 80

3 posted 2002-07-10 06:37 PM


Excellent Poem...
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