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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-09 04:19 PM


They pop up here
They pop up there
They pop up just about anywhere

it is yellow
Nasty
Squashy
and sickening

I hate zits
They are just annoying
And mess up every place
Causing scars
Yuck!

Cold hands means a warm heart

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MidnightSon
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since 2002-05-15
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between the gutter & the stars
1 posted 2002-07-09 04:22 PM


i agree...
yuck.
LOL

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

Larry C
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2 posted 2002-07-11 02:55 AM


Julie,
I suppose if Madame Chipmunk can write about nose hairs and ear hairs that you can write about zits! Yuck...

Show you care to those you love...today.

RosePetal
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3 posted 2002-07-11 03:06 AM


Not to worry, I've got the Clearasil handy!

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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Ohio, USA
4 posted 2002-07-11 10:13 AM


they are yuck - Paul
Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
5 posted 2002-07-11 02:14 PM


They may be yuck...but I hope they are the worst problem you ever have, Julie...
~ hugs and grins

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2002-07-11 02:22 PM


the_loner_23
Haven't heard the term in a long time. Enjoyed

Pilgrimage
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Texas, USA
7 posted 2002-07-11 06:16 PM




Nan(Pilgrim variety)

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