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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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divide me heart upon tulips gazing blind me from after take me to wonderland leave behind with decit take your hands and lay them before me leave me for divisions sake lock my heart through away the key forget the past within my soul rupture before me golden solitude break glass beneath my ears divide my heart upon tulips gazing lighten the day from the dark ashen this is the division that seperates me from heart and soul |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Serious stuff here.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kellie, Are you sure? I wonder... Show you care to those you love...today. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
hey, this poem isn't about me. It isn't how I feel. This poem tells that some people have it so hard and just weant to lock ther feelings up inside thats not me. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kellie, It's not illegal to write about others and their experience. So is it illegal to misinterprete?  Love ya'.Show you care to those you love...today. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
no larry its not |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
this is very well written... I think this is the first I have read from you ... and this goes to tell me about the great stuff I have been missing... Hope to catch up soon... Regards, sudhir |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
this is a spectacular piece of writing, Kellie... I enjoyed it from start to finish...  ~ hugs and smilesLyra |
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