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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-07-09 03:08 PM


Do not pass judgement
lest' judged your willing to be.
Hypocritical.

Prejudiced generations
still in existance today.
Abominable.


Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-09-2002 03:12 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-09 03:09 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-09 05:34 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Donna, this is so very truly sad, sweet friend, I wish it could be so much easier to govern fairly, but a slong a sthere are hypocrites, it seems so powerless to make everything stable! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to all hurt by hypocrisy, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is excellent!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Toerag
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3 posted 2002-07-09 05:38 PM


Strong and to the point...good write..
Marsha
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4 posted 2002-07-09 05:43 PM


Donna darling heart this is Fabulous writing  utterly utterly fabulous, never do you fail to supply my eyes with food for thought. Wonderful writing and I love it, the flow as smooth as silk excellent writing absolutely excellent


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire

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