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the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-09 02:46 PM


You plant the seed by first liking them for who they are
NOT what they look like

You water the seed by showing love
Most like a prayer from up above
Sent down like a dove

Show them they are like an angel
Or a princess
Give them the attention they need
And that will feed the seed

That is the steps to sowing the seeds of love
Which are sent from above
Like an answered prayer

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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Canada
1 posted 2002-07-09 02:49 PM


I have the power of those seeds.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Duncan
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2 posted 2002-07-09 03:04 PM


That is the steps to sowing the seeds of love
Which are sent from above
Like an answered prayer

Very true!  And a great write.  An occasional push on the swings is fun, too.


I’ll go to puppy class…if Tracey will go to cooking class

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-07-09 03:21 PM


...Beautiful...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2002-07-09 03:36 PM


ms loner
you do love well
best seller here
enjoyed it

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2002-07-09 03:46 PM


Yes these are the women I get along the best with...the ones that just accept me...and give me compliments...James
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2002-07-09 04:08 PM


Beautiful!
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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where insanity meets breeding
7 posted 2002-07-09 10:33 PM


What a perfect prescription for a beautiful garden of love. (And if the garden has a swing set…even better)

Danger...wet floor...Duncan had another accident!!! Puppy training classes to come.

Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan
8 posted 2002-07-09 10:55 PM


You water the seed by showing love
Most like a prayer from up above
Sent down like a dove

A very sweet poem, Julie....and its mostly true....
the only thing you forgot was the nice meal you're supposed to feed them....
that is really the fertilizer which makes love grow....

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
9 posted 2002-07-10 12:09 PM


Thank you for all your comments. I really appreciate them.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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