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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2002-07-09 02:45 PM



~*Pegged*~

While on her way to dinner
With her sweetheart by her side
My buddy, Marge, was smiling
For her love she cannot hide

Bill asked her where she'd like to go
She chose her favorite place
They arrived and found a table
With a smile upon each face

That Bill, he is a bright one
and he had that Margie 'pegged'
In no time she was at his feet
And for his hand she begged

"Please help me, my foreverly",
she looked at him and said
"Without you I am helpless
plagued by aches and pains and dread"

"My dear", said Bill, "I'm flattered
by your public adoration -
That you would kneel at my feet
To show your dedication"

He lovingly reached out his hand
and pulled her to his side
He said, "My Sweet, it's time
I filled this hunger deep inside"

"So please stay up here off the floor
You needn't make a scene
I'll have the chicken fried steak
It's the best I've ever seen"

Now Margie, she was not amused
But slid into her seat
And let her sweetie, Bill, believe
He'd swept her off her feet

~vlraynes


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-09-2002 02:46 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-09 02:47 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

devina
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Cali
2 posted 2002-07-09 02:54 PM


I'm just sittin here ginnin at this!!! I just know you'll squeak a smile outta Margie girl with this one!!!

too cute this is!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Toerag
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3 posted 2002-07-09 03:08 PM


THIS WAS EXCELLENT....I'd like to "peg" Marge...oops..never mind...
NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-07-09 03:20 PM


Our poor Marge is so miserable and in so much pain, I just know this is going to put a huge smile across her face.

Darn pegs!  Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-07-09 03:43 PM


I know she must be hurting...hope she gets better soon...James
suthern
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6 posted 2002-07-09 03:57 PM


ROFL... If laughter truly is the best medicine, this should cure her. *S* This is delightful! *S*
Nan
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7 posted 2002-07-09 04:05 PM


Don't laugh if it hurts too much, Marge... You can keep a straight face, can't ya??  

I guess not, huh?...

SmartChick
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8 posted 2002-07-09 04:05 PM


Awwww! This is a beautiful and delightful poem for Marge. I bet she will just love it.
Martie
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9 posted 2002-07-09 04:36 PM


Vicky

You are too much, but your love for Marge shines through the humor.  Hope she feels better soon.  Hugs, both of  you!

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2002-07-09 08:04 PM


Vicky an absolute great and witty write for Marge.  She will love it, thank you for this.....and adding wishes to her feeling better very soon.
Hugs to you both.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


Sunshine
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11 posted 2002-07-09 08:10 PM



Charming, and disarming....
I'd figure him for something other
than a chicken fried steak kinda guy...

LOL...too cute, Vicki...

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23
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12 posted 2002-07-09 09:23 PM


Vicky, this is so sweet (I bet you are too!)

*mycafe*

Keep counting your blessings

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