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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-07-09 10:45 AM


we breathe rapidly
our heat not from summer's sun
bodies radiate

Inspired byOceanic Recollect [snippet 3]


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-07-09 10:46 AM



Welcome home stranger!  
Your senryus are as beautiful as ever....

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-07-09 10:57 AM


Bob darling heart how utterly utterly perfect is this, words warm  and delightful flow over my soul from your pen. How beautifully you write, how clear the images of heat are, and how special is your writing? I can only say this is perfect, truly beautiful writing and you are incredible.

Welcome darling heart, I missed you terribly x x How are you?  


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-07-09 11:08 AM


we breathe rapidly
our heat not from summer's sun
bodies radiate


breathless, I in wait
silent smiles in cross over
reaching out to touch


nice to see your words again, and that you are feeling well enough to lend us a few.
hugss
M

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4 posted 2002-07-09 11:11 AM


Interloper
Good one enjoyed.

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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-07-09 11:36 AM


Mmmm, welcome home..
You have been missed....
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2002-07-09 02:18 PM


Echoing the welcome backs.
Nice write, too.
Sandra

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7 posted 2002-07-09 05:31 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...I just love the passionate glow in this, sweet friend, we have all missed you so much and I am so happy to see your romantic senryus again! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much, kudos to you, YAY!!!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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