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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-09 10:27 AM



Sheltered


My words
withdraw from the enemy
and at sunset I lower my flag
in seclusion.

I seek
to retreat,  wishing
for the peace and security
from within.

Concealed,
the exodus of necessity,
a limit reached that repeats
"no more".

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
1 posted 2002-07-09 10:52 AM


Maureen darling heart this is Fabulous writing darling girl utterly utterly fabulous, never do you fail to supply my eyes with delight. Wonderful writing and I love it, the flow as smooth as silk excellent writing absolutely excellent


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
2 posted 2002-07-09 11:18 AM


My words
withdraw from the enemy
and at sunset I lower my flag
in seclusion.

I love the way you express your thoughts, Maureen

~ hugs of words

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-07-09 11:21 AM


Maureen,
Enjoyed the write very much.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2002-07-09 11:37 AM


Marsha, Lyra and Sy..thank you for reading my
"small" thoughts this morning

*s
M

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