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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-09 07:51 AM



Good Morning

I dissolve
in your
heat
stir me
served up
sweet


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

1 posted 2002-07-09 07:55 AM


I'm a sipper (makes it last). This, for it's shortness was very sensual. Thanks for the pick me up.
Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
2 posted 2002-07-09 09:15 AM


I drown
in your
eyes
save me
with a kiss
and your smile

Enjoyed the read.

Sincerely
Rick

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2002-07-09 11:07 AM


Oh, I do like this one...enjoyed the smoothness!!!  Great write!!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2002-07-09 12:45 PM


may I pretend
to just the the warm sand
that clings to your damp skin

I do enjoy your briefs ms (wink)

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