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0 posted 2002-07-09 03:48 AM


The desire takes control,
it romances his soul.
To have a loved one
to cherish through the night
and into the morn.
One to hold dear,
one to long for
each livelong day.
A connection of souls,
the yin, the yang:
perfect chemistry.
He dances by the moonlight,
eying the roses in the sky.
One day with his love
this he will share.
And that fuels his footsteps.
Watch him as he nears...

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1 posted 2002-07-09 03:52 AM


Hello Everyone

This is somewhat a opening act. I've posted in Open before, but with all the changes that have occured in my life since then, since I regularly wrote poetry, I'm a large part different. At long last, I'm ready to write again. I look forward to enjoying your pieces, and hearing what you think of mine.

Sincerely,
Titus

As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together.

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2 posted 2002-07-09 04:38 AM



Hi, Titus!
Great to see you!
I really enjoyed reading this piece.

      "One day with his love
        this he will share.
   And that fuels his footsteps.
     Watch him as he nears..."

I love the feeling of anticipation that this
leaves within the reader.
Well done!
Hugs,
~Vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-09-2002 04:39 AM).]

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3 posted 2002-07-09 03:23 PM


Thanks Vicky.
It's great to be back.

~Titus

As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together.

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