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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-07-09 12:26 PM



Dark night stared upon the sand
To blacken all it's grains
Quiet stars began to shine
Thus, our beach sustains

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-09 12:29 PM


Love the beach so therefore I love this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-07-09 03:44 AM


Gives me wonderful imagery of a romantic beach under a starlit sky...

Lovely!

~mycafe

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3 posted 2002-07-10 04:43 PM


Nice imagery, enjoyed much!
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4 posted 2002-07-10 05:10 PM


Fantastic piece! Kris, I love your style. Glad I stumbled upon your pieces. Looking forward to more, and more, and... LoL.

~Titus

As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together.

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5 posted 2002-07-10 05:20 PM


Wonderful imagery you have used here *applauds*

Andrew

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6 posted 2002-07-11 12:08 PM


Beautiful words and images.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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7 posted 2002-07-11 10:59 AM


thanks for the images in this poetry - well written - Paul
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8 posted 2002-07-11 11:06 AM


Krishankins
Good one enjoyed.

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9 posted 2002-07-11 11:27 AM


The beach at sunset is ALWAYS my fav...

loved the whole scene of this Kris~~~

*hugs*
Tanya

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