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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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Why do I feel so empty? So all alone? I wish that my life was happier But I have been shown Life is full of nothing but emptiness Nothing but shame All I am is empty Nothing will ever change. Cold hands means a warm heart [This message has been edited by the_loner_23 (07-09-2002 12:17 AM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a good poem... but you listen here, young lady... You are very young and you look to be very healthy... You absolutely must cheer up and change your attitude because life is short and no one ever knows if they will have a tomorrow. Take it from an old lady who has been through some of the worst.... Life is definitely worth living....so cheer up and give it a good shot... Write some poetry...draw some pictures...shoot some photos..... get your creative juices flowing and you will be much happier........  ~ hugs of advice from an old yentaLyra |
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