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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-07-08 09:34 PM



The years pass by uncounted
but the minutes I know by name
each second since I’ve loved you
no measurement is the same

The time it took to make a star
means naught to me you see
for in that star I find the love
that I wish you had for me

We’ve subdued the jungle beasts
but my heart will not be tamed
I’ll not hold back a nanosecond
and thus said, I feel ashamed

This love took not a moment
to find a home within my heart
I do not know when it will end
nor am I sure when it did start

The clock held within my heart
doesn’t count time in normal space
it’s measured in the times I’m held
within your loving embrace



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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-08 09:35 PM


Cold hands means a warm heart

Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-07-08 09:51 PM


Talk about EMOTION!!
I'm glad you re-posted this one!!

Krishankins

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-07-08 09:53 PM


Thanks for bringing this romantic piece out Sharon!
I didn't see it on the first go round.
Wonderful write here!
~Hugs~

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4 posted 2002-07-08 10:03 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love this timeless piece and wish for many happy milestones to frame your life of love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-07-08 10:15 PM


This is just beautiful Sharon. I am glad you reposted this. I don't think I saw it the first time.
powerofthysword
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6 posted 2002-07-08 10:17 PM


Beautiful poem! You are very intuitive and
creative, I enjoyed it very much.

Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky.

Kitty**
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7 posted 2002-07-08 10:21 PM


I really, really like this...
I was captured by every line.
Thanks for reposting it !!

Kitty

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

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