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ThunderMage
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0 posted 2002-07-08 06:19 PM


She had gone so far away;
I just wanted her to stay.

She had to go and live her life,
I had to stand strong and wield my knife.

The pain was strong, my end I'd meet.
I stood and waited for defeat.

Just then she returned, my strength restored,
And I finally struck, a victory scored.

My power now at twice its norm,
I saw my evil taking form.

But when it came it found surprise,
For my courage had tripled in size!

So always remember when evil causes a fight,
Look to love and then take flight.

Love will guide you and add to your power,
Even in your darkest hour.

It gives you light in times so black,
A shield to block each dark attack.

So just remember what comes from above,
And enhance your life and strength with love.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

© Copyright 2002 Liam Hall - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-08 06:22 PM


That is beautiful. *hugs*

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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2 posted 2002-07-08 06:26 PM


So are you.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-07-08 09:59 PM


You so sweet.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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4 posted 2002-07-08 10:04 PM


So are you.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2002-07-08 11:27 PM


Bumping this up because this is some good poetry here.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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6 posted 2002-07-08 11:46 PM


Thanks Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Furie
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7 posted 2002-07-09 09:35 AM


Yay!  Excellent poem and message.
Sunnyone
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8 posted 2002-07-09 11:24 AM


I really enjoyed the intensity that I felt in your words here. Love really does give you power.....thanks for this read!!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


ThunderMage
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9 posted 2002-07-09 02:43 PM


No problem.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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