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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-07-08 12:56 PM


You are such an idiot.
How many times must you be burned?
What makes you go where no one will?
When will you ever learn?
(Now she’s going to cry again.)
Oh Please. Be spare of pained charade.
Even I am sick of you—
Weary of your tired tirade.
“Life is so unfair” she weeps.
Whoever said it would not be?

You linger yet, where evil dwells.
So Welcome, dear. Welcome to Hell.


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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-08 12:59 PM


Very good work here

Cold hands means a warm heart

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-07-08 01:17 PM


How many times must you be burned?
What makes you go where no one will?
When will you ever learn?

(Now she's going to cry again.)
Oh Please. Be spare of pained charade.
Even I am sick of you
Weary of your tired tirade.
"Life is so unfair" she weeps.
Whoever said it would not be?

You linger yet, where evil dwells.
So Welcome, dear. Welcome to Hell.
=====================================


*sigh* ... I really do need a moth icon...cuz sometimes life just aint pretty enough for the butterflies.

I also need a windex icon...
mirrors baby.....mirrors.

Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much ...
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch.

J.Browne

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
3 posted 2002-07-08 01:19 PM


Burn, burn, burn,
Like a slap across the face
You never learn,
There in foolish disgrace
Whimpering sound
Fills the heart’s empty place
Battered to the ground.

Welcome to my Nightmare
it’s all I have to share,
a place few would dare,
but you seem be already there.

Gloom

Blackdrake
Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83
Depends on the day :)
4 posted 2002-07-08 01:26 PM


Nice and warm     i like  

Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light.  ~~ ¥ ~~



catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2002-07-08 08:07 PM


Talking to yourself? Almost sounded like you were talking to me
Love this
Sandra

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

6 posted 2002-07-09 01:16 AM


I've had that conversation...sucks!


...and so it begins

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
7 posted 2002-07-09 01:58 AM


Hey!!!!!!!  Didn't the "Eagles" respond to this?  Life ain't easy and it sure as heck ain't easy when they made rose colored glasses "OUT OF STYLE".  Do ya think that was intentional?  

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

8 posted 2002-07-09 03:16 PM


somehow? I thought "self-abuse" would be more fun that this.

Thanks for tolerating me moodiness, good poets. Yer all amazing.

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