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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2002-07-08 10:46 AM



Do the shake rattle roll
do the pagoda afternoon stroll
walk by lioness fountains in rows
trip by parasoled ladies in stoles

Another venue in another life
another headframe of enchanted light
follower pokes through the celestial bubble
communicates with others to avoid trouble

Looks along tree-lined avenues
another life another venue
decision makers sail seven seas
in that blue bubble..what a tease.




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-10-2002 08:21 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-07-08 10:55 AM


ecrivan
A delight of a write, enjoyed the read.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-07-08 11:46 AM


I very much enjoyed reading this

Cold hands means a warm heart

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23
Posts 584

3 posted 2002-07-08 09:35 PM


This a very interesting read, and refreshing too!

~mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
4 posted 2002-07-09 01:28 AM


Sy,

visions of parasoled ladies at a lake, like in a Seurat painting ...my means of escaping the heat

my cafe,

just exercising that mechanism of coping with
the summer heat...yes it's refreshing

loner23

glad you liked this...

alright.


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-09-2002 01:33 AM).]

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