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Leave Well Enough Alone
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Leave Well Enough Alone |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Leave Well Enough Alone I tried to capture The mist of you And it turned Straight into dew Tried to hold The dew of you And it turned into A waters view I put it In the sun To stare There it disappeared In air And I was left With nothings share Which was more Than I could bear |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ahh Stinkylove.... when the mist of gist only gives you dew... its time to turn it into tea that will set you free  I happen to know you have the tea bags. *L* me thinks the dream will be found in the steam    Now for me some words come easy |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Loved the imagery, perish the drought. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, there is nothing worse than nothing's share. Stunningly penned though Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, a bit of a melancholy write this bright morning. But a darned good one! ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sy... this is a wonderful wisp of heart... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Melancholia birthed the rain With crystal waters hews and stain And my face is pressed against the pane. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky RSWells Clever, enjoyed. Thank you dear Keth. And thank you my dear enchantress. And your sunshine will warm me up |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I started to say some people refuse to be defined, but this speaks more to me of the sacred. You know...like, psssst...  ..."God/dess" smiling atchoo, one sip o coffee and ONE POEM and I'm thinking too hard already? gonna be a long MONDAY! Hugs you. Thanks for the jump start. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity It's always my treat to read your neat comments. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"Melancholia birthed the rain With crystal waters hews and stain And my face is pressed against the pane." ~~~~~~~~~~ even your replies are pure poetry *winkiewinkie* |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sy...i do loveeeeee the way you write...your words and mind are like an ever blooming garden of tenderness...helen |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy you sigh with poetic perfection. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Will the "mist" return yet again, with the early morning dew.... only to vanish into thin air, leaving just memories to view? Well writen and expressed Sir....Much enjoyed! ~Sheri |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the ethereal feel to this one, Sy... It reads like someone slipping through your grasp.  ~ misty hugsLyra |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
your writing is always so lovely.  I can't think of one that I haven't enjoyed. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Ok I'll make a poem out of it. Helen, A very flattering reply. Irie Beautiful comment. Lyra, Exactly, Hugs back. Temptress, Nor an answer I did not enjoy. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Seymour, this is sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright and this does not reflect a current experience of loss! (sigh) Like always you write with such zeal, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well at least you tried...what more can one do...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, No just a mood, thank you friend. James, True, thanks for the read. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
This is so good! Loved the expression in here! enjoyed... ~mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
We can't always feel that which touches us, but we can be moved by the experience and hold onto the moment, making our memories out of them. Loved the way you said this Mr. Tabin~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Seymour This was such a wonderful piece of writing that captured my attention. Such wonderful images were portrayed through your words. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mycafe, Thank you so much. BluesSerenade Loved your reply. Sue, Wonderful comment thank you. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hate it when that happens! Then there is nothing left but to move on. Core |
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