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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-07-08 05:24 AM


The vines grow,
Draped row upon row,
Up the mountainside
In hazy morning they’ll hide
A few moist with drops of dew
Waits for the sunshine to get to
Collecting together runs
Till the day’s heat comes
And forces us in
For tasting the blend,
Soft, sweet, and mellow
The vines grow.

Gloom


© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2002-07-08 06:00 AM


by the way...morning glories are my fav vines...

Word Vines

twining rhymes
to telling more
stories vine
imaginations to explore
words creep
to heart and soul
ever climbing
out of control

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-07-08 06:57 AM



and they curl
tenaciously
wrapping slip fingers
around the pole
of soul

...

ah Professor...thank you for the lovely pictures, thank you for the warm inspire...

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
3 posted 2002-07-08 09:08 AM


Gloom,
A de vine poem, it caught me up
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Professor Gloom
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4 posted 2002-07-08 09:10 AM


Thank you, 1slick_Lady,
Pleased you liked my little rhyme,
And I enjoyed your poetic response.

Thank you, Sunshine,
Glad you liked,
I just write what I see, or have seen,
Of late that was Vineyards.

Thank you, Kethry
Pleased you enjoyed the tangle of words


Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (07-08-2002 09:13 AM).]

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2002-07-08 09:28 AM


gloom, this was a pleasure to read
enjoyed the opportunity of the view sir

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2002-07-08 09:59 AM


Welcome back.

You do paint with word so well. Whether it be city angst or nature's mellow--this is lovely, and I like this shade of you.

Professor Gloom
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7 posted 2002-07-08 10:17 AM


Thank you, Dark Stranger,
It pleases me to give you a pleasurable read.

Thank you, Serenity,
Paint, nay, I just scatter a few words across the page,
Grasping the words of things I see and simply placing them,
Glad you enjoy my meager efforts.
And this shade is called Berry Nectar, or at least that’s what the bottle said

Gloom

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8 posted 2002-07-08 08:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully delightful, sweet friend, this is wonderful, may the vines of your heart always bear the olives of many blessings, we all love you so much, this is excellent!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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