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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2002-07-08 05:23 AM


Impression


you are
the flame
to wick
wax changed
heat melted
liquid rendered
my pen
flows from
that ink
© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
1 posted 2002-07-08 05:27 AM

Seems like words flow from candlelight,
I know when I sit late at night,
Electricity doesn’t seem right.

Your poem was a delight.

Gloom
1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2002-07-08 05:37 AM

thank you professor...where have you been...i have missed you...helen
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
3 posted 2002-07-08 05:29 PM

I'm running out of words, Helen.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-07-08 05:32 PM

1slick_lady
So much with so few words.
the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
5 posted 2002-07-08 05:33 PM

Cold hands means a warm heart
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