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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you inspire the air to leave me and take me there on a wing of dreams I pray to be wind that you breathe as love and exhale as moments that will linger on the memory walls in the halls of your mind embossed in black and white with color and frames that sing love songs in other tongues so you know heaven has written the words then there is now when we are a cord twisted from two fibers like limbs entwined dipped in the same wet that makes sweet our flavor and our bodies are mouths we taste with heart tongues that recognize now we are just one ©Dark |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Always enjoy the way you twist words into a delightful read. Gloom |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
DS, astounding I pray to be wind that you breathe as love and exhale as moments that will linger on the memory walls in the halls of your mind Very gentle and beautiful from your passion pen this morning. Me thinks you could be a big ole teddy bear when ya want to huh? Loved it hon. Morning from across the country. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You always add a bit of flavor to the first cup of the morning... a gorgeous read... a great inspire... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I love the braided thoughts of this piece Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark~ There are times you turn the reader into a puddle of romantic mush, this is one of those times.... beautiful! ~slow hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger The web glistens with crystal droplets. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Gloom, thanks sir for the review, I appreciate your thoughts amigo Donna, slow hugs and big coffee cups of smile lady, thanks for your sweet touch Sunshine, good morning lady fair, and thanks for the slow dance smile you left me here. Kethry, bless you ms for the read and the review, thanks for your sweet touch Enchantress, mmmm I love puddles, thanks for your comments my dear. Sy, humble thanks guy, I really appreicate your consideration of my humble offerings. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"we taste with heart tongues" Your word choices are somehow intimate and innocent all at once, and? mmmmm...erotic! oh yeah... Happy Monday, ds! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ms serene... yes am innocent for sure hope nothing I said was suggestive (grin) |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I pray to be wind that you breathe as love and exhale as moments that will linger on the memory walls in the halls of your mind
[This message has been edited by rwood (07-08-2002 01:23 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I think it is you that inspires the air with this beautiful poem.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina; would be a pleasure to see if it was possible to be overdo such might take some time don't ya think? thanks babe ms martie, hi lady neighbor, did you sleep in this am...(wink) morning waves from the sunside of the valley, and thanks for the wiggle words here |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oooohhhhhh...I love this delightful treasure, sweet friend, this is wonderful and so awe-inspiring, you are always the sugar in the morning tea, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You are the only one I read that tumbles words so delicately and innocent??? lost among the suggestion sweets...  *as I read under & inbetween...just hopin for a morsel*grin... enjoyed this... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I pray to be wind that you breathe as love and exhale as moments that will linger on the memory walls in the halls of your mind You do the soft stuff awful nice DS~ I mean really, how does one encase the air and tuck it in a silver lining~ You go big guy~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Another stellar work, Dark. I enjoyed the entire piece, but, this is what really does it for me; "I pray to be wind that you breathe as love and exhale as moments that will linger on the memory walls in the halls of your mind" I do enjoy your labors, sir. ~wranx |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Some sweet air you're breathin'! Core |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, humble thanks sir for the read and reply devina, it is a treat to see you lean that way to read between lines, thanks babe bluezy, thanks hon, you bless me with your tan lady walk by, I enjoy your touches wranx, humble thanks, so pleased to crinkle a grin from you cor' missed you being around ms, thanks for the read and the visit. |
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