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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-08 04:29 AM



Imagine


yes
I hold
you tight
and you
question me
with
looking eyes
and I
say
to you
we will
work
on tomorrow


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-08 11:45 AM


Cold hands means a warm heart

Krawdad
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2 posted 2002-07-08 02:05 PM


h
Does that mean we have today off?
Sorry, feeling a little "smart" today and your poem got in the way.
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I like the tone of this.
Questioning eyes and telling eyes . . . too bad we can't see them here.  What color are your's, by the way?
e

"Grab a pen, grab some paper, do yourself a little favor."    e

1slick_lady
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3 posted 2002-07-08 03:35 PM


ty loner
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e...smarty pants...giggle...no the sheriff dept calls me to work...no day off till wed and thur...work all week end too...my eyes are blue...dark blue...i bet you have the eyes of a cat - green...glad you liked...and looking and questioning eyes never need to ask at times...the other person just KNOWS...h

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4 posted 2002-07-08 07:30 PM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we'll miss you throughout the week while you're working but come back whenever you can! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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