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ggrn3
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0 posted 2002-07-08 04:17 AM


In lucid dreams
you are like a vision beyond light
like a wolf's serenade to the moon
everything seems so right

If I could show you
as you come to me unadorned
if my dream were true
I'd welcome you with open arms

Forever dreamin
as I lay my head upon my hands
my lovely nightly vision
disappears like shifting grains of sand

We are like dancing shadows
that get together every night
frolicing warily around
until mornings first light.

Garfield

© Copyright 2002 Garfield Green III - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-08 11:43 AM


Beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-07-08 12:50 PM


Lucid dreams are like "E" ticket rides at Disney world.

paladin

Kethry
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3 posted 2002-07-08 05:08 PM


don't you just love it when a dream comes together? I do, just as I love this piece, with its superb language.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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4 posted 2002-07-08 07:37 PM


I like this....back to the top it goes
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5 posted 2002-07-08 07:41 PM




(smiles) Oh Garfield, I love this, sweet friend, may you always be serenaded by the wolf of your dreams, sweet friend, this is enchanting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Garfield, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ggrn3
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6 posted 2002-07-09 10:21 PM


Thank you all
for your wonderful comments.

Garfield

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