The breeze of yesterday...

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CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

0 posted 2002-07-08 03:35 AM

As twilight moon
begin's to creep
in between
the limbs
of trees
and
like before
on a night
as this
her arms begin
their slow uncoil
stretching outward
into swirling wind
yearning for
a yesterday's dream...

And like the frail
autumn leaf
suspended in
an endless drift
so does her spirit
gravitate
into the breeze
of yesterday
where each new dawn
brought joy and love
and foreverafters
were not only found
in fairy tale novels...
*~coco~*

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (07-08-2002 03:40 AM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-07-08 05:54 AM

Its hard to believe in forever without the luxury of personal experiences to point to...but I am a believer in foreverafters...James

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-07-08 07:52 AM

And like the frail
autumn leaf
suspended in
an endless drift
so does her spirit
gravitate
into the breeze
of yesterday
=============================

how very lovely is this!!!!
Great use imagery here Coco!!
What a wonderful write of spirit and faith..
and a very cool picture to enhance your soft spoken delicate words.
Very cool to get to read you for a change Poetess-girlie

Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much ...
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch.

J.Browne

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-07-08 09:12 AM

Coco..this is SO beautiful!!!
I absolutely love it..
even if I am partial to the moon and all...
Wonderful imagery here.
Thank you for the morning read.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-07-08 09:19 AM

Coco,
I go along with JM on this one.

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2002-07-08 09:23 AM

How delightful,
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2002-07-08 09:56 AM

I need to collect all of my favorite "moon" poems--sigh...this one will lead the way! saving this, Coco...it is wonderful to read you again. Loved it all but the opening imagery is just stunning and captures the mood of watching a moonrise.

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

7 posted 2002-07-08 01:52 PM

Impressive! I really enjoyed it!

Neeraja

Irie
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since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

8 posted 2002-07-08 04:48 PM

BEAUTIFUL

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

Temptress

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since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

9 posted 2002-07-08 05:09 PM

*sigh*
And I'm just going to echo everyone else.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

10 posted 2002-07-08 05:10 PM

very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

11 posted 2002-07-08 08:03 PM

Perfect and lovely, Coco. Good to see you.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2002-07-08 08:07 PM

(smiles) YAY!!! This is a true fairy-tale delight, sweet friend, I just love the full moon fever effects you glow in here, sweet friend, this is breathttaking, we all love you so much, thank you so much for sharing this gem!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2002-07-08 08:09 PM

Coco

Gorgeous word picture. Lovely to read you again!

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

14 posted 2002-07-08 08:51 PM

and foreverafters
were not only found
in fairy tale novels...

and the above...priceless bit of lines

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

15 posted 2002-07-08 08:57 PM

I look forward to reading your work CocoBaci~
it is always such a treat and this is no exception. Very nice indeed~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

16 posted 2002-07-08 08:57 PM

oh Coco this is absolutely beautiful poet friend. wonderful!!

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

17 posted 2002-07-08 09:10 PM

SweetPoetFriends, my heart hugz you many many times for your most kind words2me here in your replies just bring's out a twinkle in my eyes and I gotta tell ya that is no simple feat which is why you're all so very much appreciated as Poets and dear friends to me...

James, Janet, Enchantress, Seymour, Kethry, Serenity, Neerja, Irie, Temptress, Loner23, Cat, Angel, Martie, Vas, Blues, Spirit... muaah on cheeks2u sweet poetFriends

*~coco~*

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

18 posted 2002-07-08 10:15 PM

coco,

A truely beautiful write, enjoyed much.
I'd like some foreverafters.

Parker

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

19 posted 2002-07-08 11:27 PM

Parker, I've missed ya here on these pages blue and it's especially sweet2see that you let me know you took a peak at this poem I share...
Thank you dearPoetFriend...
Smiles2uAlways
*~coco~*

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

20 posted 2002-07-09 01:17 AM

Ahhhhhhhhh ... now this is what I am talkin' about. You painted the vision with your words well and I didn't need to see the picture to see the portrait of your verse. The following lines are one to treasure and never let go of:

And like the frail
autumn leaf
suspended in
an endless drift
so does her spirit
gravitate
into the breeze
of yesterday

************

Now that is a mix of pure poetic gold and imagery supreme. Excellent to read your words again and I thank you for sharing a part of you in all that you write.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

21 posted 2002-07-09 01:42 AM

MarkSweetie, thank you very much4your reply touches my heart...
And like the autumn leaf suspended in an endless drift there's one thing that I failed2write of which just came2mind and that my friend is that Destiny's Wind shall guide us2new tomorrows...
TeddyBearHugs2u...
*~coco~*

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