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ahawkman New Member
since 2002-07-03
Posts 2 |
Unknown girl. Where is she…. Where is my love… Will I ever get love. Will I just get rejection. Must all I get is rejection. Must no one love me back. Must I only love. Everytime I look at you, I see something great, But what hurts is, we will never date. I lay down in bed, and wonder why, Why must rejection make me cry. I get weaker and weaker as the days go by, Everytime I see you I blush, and im shy. As rain beats on my window I stair and think, Everytime I talk to you a part of me shrinks. How is it so easy for my friends to get what they want or need, Why must I continue to not succeed. People say im fine, its just a phase, My love for you puts me in a daze. You say I make you feel better, but what do I get back, Nothing but just the feeling of crap. You toy with my emotions, and I do not like it one bit, Cause I would do anything you would say, being quick. Why must I feel pain over this girl, Because she’s beautiful as a pearl? Because sometimes she listens, and tells me im a great friend. But that’s not how I feel in the end. I can talk to you for hours, without getting bored, I wish you would know how much you are adored. I am a dreamer, all I do is dream, and fantasize, Cause you make me feel good why cant you relize, I need you around all the time, because I love you so much. All I need is your touch. A simple kiss would do the trick. It would make my heart do flips. But as I come out of my dream, I know that will not come true, I am just a broken down foo. I am a loser, and that is about it, My friends don’t like the way I feel one bit. But why cant they understand all I want is love. Maybe if I prey I will get help from above. WHERE IS SHE. WHERE IS MY LOVE. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Don't be so hard on yerself! I love the poem! I hope love finds you soon!! Kris |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love this poem. I thought like this before I meet Liam Cold hands means a warm heart |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hey, dont put yourself down like that. You seem to be a caring, loveable young man and SHE will come to you when the time is right. don't give up. |
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ahawkman New Member
since 2002-07-03
Posts 2 |
thanks for everything guys, i love this input. and im starting to feel a little better |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Go on with your life and don't worry so much...if she is interested she will come around..if not why waste so much time with her when she's not ready or willing...who knows there might be someone else just around the corner...but you will never see her if you are too busy looking at her...just some thoughts...James |
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