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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-07 11:22 PM


On this thrill ride you go upside down
You go through cork screws and loops
Man I hope nobody pukes
Ew Ew Ew
That would be sick
They take you pic
On the first drop
Man anybody would look like a slob
Your hair in your face looks like a blob
Some people look like they are gonna sob
But I just screamed like a mad woman
It was just fun


Cold hands means a warm heart

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Duncan
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1 posted 2002-07-07 11:53 PM


And that's exactly why I don't do coasters!  Fun write!


New sig in construction.  Please maintain speed limit.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2002-07-08 12:38 PM


Fun!
What else is the answer to this serious life?
ThisDiamond

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2002-07-13 06:47 AM


Ah, yes........life is just a roller coaster ride, making some people sick, while the rest of us have a great time!!  Loved this...took me back a few years to my last wild ride in Santa Cruz!!!!!  

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
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A Mountain Paradise
4 posted 2002-07-13 07:30 PM


Geez, my tummy feels squeemish just reading this. Even as a youngster, a zillion years ago, I could never ride on these things. Your words made it feel so so real!

Ooops, gotta run, not feeling too well.

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
5 posted 2002-07-13 09:06 PM


oops gotta spew
ew ew ew
outstanding write
a joyriders delight
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2002-07-13 09:17 PM


If I remember correctly, since I didn't buy the picture,  I'm almost certain it wasn't my best shot. Cute poem loner one!
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