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angelswing
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

0 posted 2002-07-07 10:39 PM

Gleam of light .

Rays of light shine forth from the sky,
Pocking through the dark and the gloom,
The rays of light are in my eye,
Suddenly everything’s in bloom;
Rose petals like your cherry lips,
Birds sing so sweetly like your speech,
My heart is doing turns and flips,
This beauty love to me does teach;
So when I gaze out at nature,
And see your face just smiling back,
I realize I have found a cure,
For all the thing’s I lack;
Rays of light shine forth from the sky,
The twinkle in your endless eye .

Written by Tom Baker .©

[This message has been edited by angelswing (07-07-2002 10:40 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-07 11:24 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-07-07 11:49 PM

Nice one! very joyful!

Krishankins

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

3 posted 2002-07-08 12:16 PM

Not only beautiful, but amazing imagery.. an enchanting tale of wonderous feelings. These things are what I dream of for myself one day...

bethann

What is past is prologue;
what to come,
In yours and my discharge.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-07-08 06:33 PM

Very nice...James

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-07-08 06:51 PM

A beautiful tribute to a fine lady, Tom.
Isn't Mom Nature wonderful.

~ hugs of nature

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-07-08 06:52 PM

(smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may you always hold your angel close to your heart and share true happiness with her always! (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tom, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-07-08 07:11 PM

enjoy

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

8 posted 2002-07-09 11:30 PM

Thank you all, you are so kind with your words ... The truth is that unfortunatly I can only dream of a love like this; something I have experienced once or twice but probably never again . I wanted to write a sonnet which is how I came to structure the poem like this, but in the end I realsised that my poetry has always been short line poetry so I stuck on 7 syllables a line instead of 10 .
As ever your replies are over wealmingly beautiful; thanks .
L.of.L. Tom .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

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