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Open Poetry #21

Glass-Bottomed Boat

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-07-07 05:08 PM

On the glass-bottomed boat
of forever...I see your heart
pulsing in rhythm with my own.
Soft and gentle ripples
of the everlasting
caressing the face of beauty
stored inside.Seeing
no other face but yours
which fills my soul
which rapture divine.
As water lilies float by
in a water-ballet
of love's lightness, love's
fragrant embrace.
Nothing hidden...all emotions
brought to the light.And,
we, two lovers, knowing that
we journey together
over the oceans of life
ina glass-bottomed boat
.....of forever.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-07-07 05:13 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you always ride the boat of love together into each others dreams, sweet friend, this is romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-07-07 06:16 PM

Lovely images. I like this one.

Nan

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-07-08 10:17 PM

I liked the scenery underwater and the way you brought love to the surface and let it float across forever! Your poetry is soothing to my soul Ivy Rose~

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-07-08 10:23 PM

That was just beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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