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What I'm Thinking |
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Street Poet Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 82 |
What I`m Thinking I`m thinking Me and you should be together I`m thinking Your the type of girl that`s down for whatever Showing me the elegance of your style got me diggin you now I`m thinking What`s behind the pretty face Nice body and silk lace My mind is telling me your one of a kind I`m thinking Does she think of herself as more than a dimepiece To me your a beautiful black queen who is unique I`m thinking Is she into the whole bling bling thing Or does she enjoy walks in the park with a brotha that can sing A romantic candlelight dinner for two with a city-wide view And after all of these thoughts in my head I`m thinking Is she thinking of me |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
 Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! This is a powerful debut, sweet friend, I just know she is thinking of you too and will be so lucky to share such happiness with you, this is wonderfully heartfelt, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-07-2002 04:23 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Street Poet! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes we always have to wonder about that...is she thinking similar thoughts of us...James |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Hey Streetpoet Nice entrance into PASSIONS. I hope you enjoy it here. I've been a member since open poetry #9. I haven't posted lately, but I stop by to see and read periodically all the new poets gems. I hope you find that BLACK QUEEN. I have mine here with me. Be cool, keep writing and posting. Peace out. Garfield [This message has been edited by ggrn3 (07-08-2002 04:20 AM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You KNOW she is. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Street Poet! Now that was fun gettin' to know what you were thinkin' I'm thinkin' I don't wanna know what the bling bling thing is like it might be more of a private thing but your poem is a delightful read! you surely must be the romantic guy you're proposin' to be if she's thinkin' of ye Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I think we all have had the same thought a time or two~  reading another person's mind is no simple task...So I tell myself he's gotta be! Welcome to passions~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Nice poem, SP.... Welcome to Passions, and I hope to read more of your work.  ~ welcoming hugsLyra |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Man I wanted more and I received it. You are definitely a great poet. Thanks for the read. Much Love to you... Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
the rhythm was awesome on this. great entrance. hope you enjoy your stay 'round here. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Street Poet- Welcome to Passions! I really enjoyed reading this piece. I look forward to reading lots more from you. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I liked! Said if I only could ... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I would imagine that you will know if she is sssoooooon enough.... Welcome to PiP, enjoy yourself here... |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Very C o o l, I like your write Your sharp, your smooth, you'll like this site Send more, more and then more... |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
I'm thinking there's a place here been waiting for you. Welcome to the joint. S Arthur |
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