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Rhiannonuu
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since 2002-07-07
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Colorado, USA

0 posted 2002-07-07 03:24 PM


I feel you have crept
deep inside of my being
and taken up residence under my skin

Can you feel what it's like to be me
when I'm with you?
When you touch me
can you feel me respond with desire?

Can you feel my pulse quicken
my head start to swim
when I feel the warm breath
of your sighs on my skin?

Can you see you as I do
through my eyes?
perfection
how amazing and brilliant
I find you to be?

You are my true reward
my one perfect fit
You are my journey's end
and I'm sure of it

© Copyright 2002 Robin - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-07 03:28 PM


I love this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-07-07 03:28 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I wish you and Chris the greatest happiness forever and ever, this is soooo romantic! (kiss on cheek) Your words shine with smiles, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robin, thak you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Rhiannonuu
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3 posted 2002-07-07 03:49 PM


Thank you both.....I think I will enjoy it here!
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