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Rhiannonuu
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since 2002-07-07
Posts 5
Colorado, USA

0 posted 2002-07-07 03:10 PM


My love, I can't sleep
for the beat of my heart
has been tangled with yours
and although we're apart....

you are what I desire
and my longing won't rest
til you lay by my side
I've been sure from the start...

that we are the same
two leaves from one tree
two souls
for our destiny's joining prepared

My eyes are wide open
My heart standing ready
to welcome you in
without doubt...without fear

My love, I can't sleep
for the want of your touch
But the darkness descends
and I find
that I must

© Copyright 2002 Robin - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2002-07-07 03:11 PM


just beautiful...and welcome to passions...you will love it here...helen
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2 posted 2002-07-07 03:14 PM




WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, such sweet romance and heartfelt emotion fills your words, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous debut in Open, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Robin, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, I noticed you are from Colorado, I am too, YAY, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-07-07 03:16 PM


Awesome!!!!!!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

Rhiannonuu
New Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 5
Colorado, USA
4 posted 2002-07-07 03:51 PM


thanks all....I'm happy to be writing again
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2002-07-07 04:45 PM


Lovely...is this like Sleepless in Seattle...James
Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA
6 posted 2002-07-07 05:20 PM


Rhiannonuu...Very beautiful expression of love to your soulmate.  EXCELLENT POEM!!!

***Ivy Rose

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